this is a mock up of a business card I’m working on for my own personal use…
I’d appreciate any feedback anyone would like to give…
I’m thinking the text is a bit clumped….
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April 5, 2007 at 1:26 am
I would lose the stroke around the text (looks like it’s only on some of it).
Looks like the text, especially at the bottom, needs some breathing room.
You might also think about using a picture of yourself. This design might result in a “This isn’t you!” reaction.
Just my thoughts.
April 5, 2007 at 2:10 am
my thoughts exactly on the cramped text, after looking at it…
and as for the photo, I wanted to use my work…but wasn’t sure I wanted my face on it…ugh…I don’t know.
April 5, 2007 at 3:25 am
way too much text. nice colors though and nice font. i think the photo is good.