Feedback

this is a mock up of a business card I’m working on for my own personal use…
I’d appreciate any feedback anyone would like to give…
I’m thinking the text is a bit clumped….
opinions?

Making the Choice.

Lately, the need for a ‘good’ camera…other than my little, tiny, point-and-shoot has been on my mind…
I’ve been wanting to get a nice camera for about 2 years or more now…and as soon as I pay off my keyboard…its what I plan on investing in.
My probably is…do I go all out…and purchase a Digital SLR? [...]